tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6740344366320319460.comments2013-10-28T18:49:48.782-07:00JNR WritingJennifer Roushhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02184342005475887375noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6740344366320319460.post-42494432785109391452013-10-28T18:49:48.782-07:002013-10-28T18:49:48.782-07:00I'm loving this story so far! I've gotta c...I'm loving this story so far! I've gotta check out the rest of the site on my computer. My phone does you no justice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6740344366320319460.post-76809697775066405762013-10-14T08:06:25.351-07:002013-10-14T08:06:25.351-07:00I just noticed, between posts 5 and 6, that I have...I just noticed, between posts 5 and 6, that I have not been faithful to the basics of scene construction (and epistolary writing is an especially difficult medium in which to remember this). So I will endeavor to rectify this mistake: I will try to have every scene have a both a "scene" and a "sequel": goal, obstacles, turnabout, consequence, reaction, decision--> next goal. In short, each post will read better and a little easier as I get used to doing it. It'll also have more of a perceived cliff-hanger.Jennifer Roushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02184342005475887375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6740344366320319460.post-11247359139942397362013-10-09T11:09:23.811-07:002013-10-09T11:09:23.811-07:00Shoot! I was thinking my boys, who wouldn't sa...Shoot! I was thinking my boys, who wouldn't say a word before 2. I like the scariness of "13", though. I may have to re-think this part. :-) Just wait until she says "Theommis", LOLJennifer Roushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02184342005475887375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6740344366320319460.post-86968319289756301142013-10-09T09:41:13.712-07:002013-10-09T09:41:13.712-07:00Fun! BTW my daughter talked a lot at 13 months.Fun! BTW my daughter talked a lot at 13 months.The Busy Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06436661456524769835noreply@blogger.com